You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter: say which electrical goods you want ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay explain how you will collect the goods
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter with my full regards that i
am your daily consumer and wish to buy Change the capitalization
I
a premium electronic goods
from your shop.
I have seen the advertisement Correct the article-noun agreement
premium electronic goods
a premium electronic good
of
Change preposition
for
new
electric cooker and pan in the newspaper. I am highly impressed with the automatic Correct article usage
a new
temprature
control facilities. I am eagerly waiting for Correct your spelling
temperature
such
items and I want to buy it
.
To be very true, I have no idea of the cost of the products. I found it actually needful, and ready to pay Correct pronoun usage
them
genuine
price for Add an article
the genuine
a genuine
such
useful house hold
things. Correct your spelling
household
Therefore
, kindly let me know the price of these comodities
.
I recently shifted to the new home which is actually far away from your shop as Correct your spelling
commodities
compare
to my previous location. Change the form of the verb
compared
For instance
, it would be a great help if you can
send products Wrong verb form
could
at
my office address which is Change preposition
to
in
between my home and your shop.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you.
Change preposition
apply
Your
Replace the word
You're
You are
truely
AashimaCorrect your spelling
truly
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite