Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the growth and expansion of
Chorleywood
village from 1868 to 1994.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that there are so
many significant changes in Rephrase
apply
Chorleywood
Village such
as in transportation, land, and infrastructure development.
To begin
with, during the first era in
1868 to 1883, the village was still small enough with only one main road. Later in the second Change preposition
from
period
, from 1883 to 1992, the construction of the first land was beginning, as
Correct word choice
and as
result
the Correct article usage
a result
Chorleywood
Station was built. In addition
, the railway was also
built in this
period
, exactly in 1909.
Next in the third period
, from 1922 to 1970, the modern era started to begin
. There are two new lands constructed in the south, near to
Change preposition
apply
Chorleywood
station and railway. Entering the last
period
, from 1970 to 1994, the motorway was built in 1970 as well as
the new expansion land. There were 5 new lands, 3 of them were across the motorway and railway, and the rest 2 of them located in the north.Submitted by zefanyagyu on
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