The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts illustrate the changes
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the
fuel
sources
for making
electricity
in two different countries in 1980 and 2000. From
this
chart, we can immediately observe that the total production of
electricity
in 2000 was around twice as it was in 1980, both in
Australia
and France.
However
, the
amount
of
electricity
production
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by different
fuel
sources
was quite different in both countries. For
Australia
, in 1980, there were 20
units
and 10
units
of
electricity
produced by natural gas and oil, respectively. Dramatically, in 2000, the demand
of
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both of these
sources
decreased, and only 4
units
of
electricity
were produced.
Moreover
, no significant changes happened in the
amount
of
electricity
made by hydropower in 1980, and 2000 as well.
However
, as a
fuel
source that hasn’t been used in
Australia
, nuclear power seems to be more popular in France, which made 15
units
in 1980. In 2000, apparently, nuclear power became the main
fuel
source for producing
electricity
. 126
units
of
electricity
were made from
this
source, which was 8 times as much as the
amount
in 1980.
Furthermore
, there was no change in the usage of coal to make
electricity
between 1980 and 2000.
In contrast
, the
amount
of
electricity
made by coal increased significantly, compared with in 1980. All in all, there was a lot of change in the different
fuel
sources
for making the
amount
of
electricity
in
Australia
and France in 1980 and 2000
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