Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think that this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think chldren will find it difficult. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

It is expected that people aspire for better lives for their

families

, especially for parents who are motivated to provide comfortable lifestyles to their

children

. In order to lead a better future for their

children

, many

families

today are relocating abroad for job opportunities.

Nevertheless

, others think that moving abroad is a huge and challenging change for

children

. Both views will be discussed and personal

opinion

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of

high paying

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jobs overseas is enormous compared to the

third world

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countries

.

This

is the reason why people in poor

countries

are looking for work in

western

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countries

.

For example

, many Asians are processing their working visa to work and live in Australia or Canada as these

countries

provide higher salaries and better health care and education for their

families

. As

such

, most citizens in Asia will choose to move

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countries

with greener

pasture

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pastures

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than stay

in

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their land and allow their

children

to starve.

However

,

children

find it difficult to adjust abroad, as others perceive that language is a great barrier for them to socialise.

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barrier is a valid reason why some

children

end up as a victim of bullying. To illustrate, Chinese students in foreign

countries

are mostly being bullied not only because of their race but

also

their way of communication. It is no wonder that they felt excluded and isolated because they

are

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completely different from other

children

in their new environment. In conclusion, there

advantage

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advantages

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and

disadvantage

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disadvantages

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of relocating abroad. It is beneficial for parents as they can find better jobs, but it is

also

detrimental for

children

as they can experience being excluded and isolated. In my opinion,

families

, including parents and

children

, must discuss both

positive

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and negative effects of moving

in

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another place so that they

could

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help each other to adjust, solve problems and move forward.