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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The
people
 were giving
money
 to
chairty
 by age 18+ till 65 and between 1990 - 2010 . Actually in 1990 all ages were higher on
chairty
 than 2010 , When we think about
this
 we can notice the life in 1990 wasn't easy like 2010 and even with that the
people
 with all difrent ages has higher. Volnteers in 2010 was lower but if we notice the chart we can see only 51-65 years higher than 1990 it could be
also
 from the retaired salary that nowdays gives for old workers
also
 +65 has higher percentge so when we think about it and try to simple it on points: 1- Younger
people
 from 18 to 50 were higher in 1990 . 2- Older
people
 from 36 to +65 were higher in 2010 . What do you think about nowdays ? I would say it probably the same in 2010 but
this
 will be my only opinion . Some workers they complain about low salaries but they
also
 still give
money
 to
chairty
 because they belive
people
 must help each other because when you give
money
 to
chairty
 will go for many ways i'll give some examples as points: 1. Feed homeless
people
. 2.Make shelters for homeless. 3.Learn and teach kids who has no school. 4.Help anyone in the
chairty
 area who need
money
 or food.
This
 simple examples for what
chairty
 do on the volnteer
money
,
This
 will be the
last
 on my article and i hope you will get the benfiet from what i wrote. With all my love and respect. My best regards Amjad
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, money, chairty with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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