The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
The
people
were giving
money
to
chairty
by age 18+ till 65 and between 1990 - 2010 . Actually in 1990 all ages were higher on
chairty
than 2010 , When we think about
this
we can notice the life in 1990 wasn't easy like 2010 and even with that the
people
with all difrent ages has higher. Volnteers in 2010 was lower but if we notice the chart we can see only 51-65 years higher than 1990 it could be
also
from the retaired salary that nowdays gives for old workers
also
+65 has higher percentge so when we think about it and try to simple it on points: 1- Younger
people
from 18 to 50 were higher in 1990 . 2- Older
people
from 36 to +65 were higher in 2010 . What do you think about nowdays ? I would say it probably the same in 2010 but
this
will be my only opinion . Some workers they complain about low salaries but they
also
still give
money
to
chairty
because they belive
people
must help each other because when you give
money
to
chairty
will go for many ways i'll give some examples as points: 1. Feed homeless
people
. 2.Make shelters for homeless. 3.Learn and teach kids who has no school. 4.Help anyone in the
chairty
area who need
money
or food.
This
simple examples for what
chairty
do on the volnteer
money
,
This
will be the
last
on my article and i hope you will get the benfiet from what i wrote. With all my love and respect. My best regards Amjad
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