The provided chart depicts the proportion change in the share of international students among university graduates in numerous states of Canada from 2001 to 2006.

The provided chart depicts the proportion change in the share of international students among university graduates in numerous states of Canada from 2001 to 2006.
The bar graph illustrates the percentage of international graduates in various Canadian provinces
such
as Quebec, Alberta and Ontario among others over the period of 2001 to 2006.
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, there has been an increase
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international students across all the provinces in 2006 from 2001. In 2001, the highest number of
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was in New Brunswick at about 7%, and
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was followed by Nova Scotia at 6%.
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Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador had the same figure of around 3.5%. The lowest intake was in Ontario at just 3%. In 2006, the data from all the locations increased in comparison to the past figures. New Brunswick witnessed the highest number of international graduates at 12%,
while
British Columbia and Nova Scotia saw the next best data at just above 10% each. The lowest of
this
year belonged to Ontario again at an estimated 6% of graduates. Regardless, New Brunswick and British Columbia experienced the biggest difference in data between the two time periods.
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