The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.

The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014.
The bar chart describes the number of people who
get
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a job in 1984, 200 and 2014 in Australia.
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,
the
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most men in Australia
employed
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in
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age 34 to 44. The age 60 to 64 was the lowest period than anyone.
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the shape, there was a great similarity of percentage in 35-44 at all these
period
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.
In addition
, the high was increased sharply and even.
While
the second
eara
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area
had small differences but in 2014 was decreased rapidly to 50%. In ages 60-
64
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64,
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the enrolled job was low because it is old people.
However
, in 1984 and 2001, the rate of employees was the same. In 2014 the percentage rose dramatically to 60%.
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