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The line chart shows the birth rate in the USA and China from 1920 to 2000

The line chart shows the birth rate in the USA and China from 1920 to 2000
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The line chart displays the Natality in
USA
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the USA
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 and China between 1920 and 2000.
Overall
, it is evident that there was a downward trend in the
numbers
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number
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 of
birth
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births
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 in the two countries over the years.
To begin
 with, In 1920,the highest value stood at 11 in the United
states
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 and 10 in China.The two countries
both
 witnessed a similar pattern from 1920 to 1930 as there
was
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were
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 fluctuations,
although
, between 1930 and 1935, there was an intersection of
both
 rates at 12 followed by a plunge in
both
 nations to 5 in 1945.
Furthermore
, there was a rapid increase to 20 in America hitting the peak of the chart, simultaneously,the other country
also
 saw a sudden rise to 15 in 1990.
However
, there was a dramatic fall in
both
 figures in
both
 countries as
USA
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the USA
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 stood at 7 being the highest birth value in that year,
while
 China dipped to 3 and was the
least
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lowest
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 in 2000.
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