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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given
floor
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plan
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 delineates the information regarding the existing
plan
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 of the ground
floor
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 with the proposed
plan
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 for the building work. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that that
floor
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plan
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 has been changed over some time to provide some larger space. The foyer
door
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 in the existing
plan
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 is in the form of a hall with
stairs
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 in it. These
stairs
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 have a warehouse under the
stairs
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.
While
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 the hall leads to two interior doors.
One
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door
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 opens in the
kitchen
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,
while
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 the other
door
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 opens in the living room. The living room contains a window, which is in the shape of a half The
kitchen
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 has two openings
one
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 from the hall and the other
one
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 just opposite the internal
door
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,
kitchen
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 has two windows.
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, the main entrance remains the same,
however
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, now
this
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 is parallel to the
stairs
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, which do not have storage in it. On the left side of the main entrance, double internal doors are presently leading to the
kitchen
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 has been furnished with
kitchen
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 furniture. The entrance of the living is open and the window remains the same.
However
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, the internal walls are only
one
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 in the proposed plans, unlike in existing
floor
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plan
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 that has 2 internal walls.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words floor, plan, door, stairs, one, kitchen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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