You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given
floor
plan
delineates the information regarding the existing
plan
of the ground
floor
with the proposed
plan
for the building work. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that that
floor
plan
has been changed over some time to provide some larger space. The foyer
door
in the existing
plan
is in the form of a hall with
stairs
in it. These
stairs
have a warehouse under the
stairs
.
While
the hall leads to two interior doors.
One
door
opens in the
kitchen
,
while
the other
door
opens in the living room. The living room contains a window, which is in the shape of a half The
kitchen
has two openings
one
from the hall and the other
one
just opposite the internal
door
,
kitchen
has two windows.
On the other hand
, the main entrance remains the same,
however
, now
this
is parallel to the
stairs
, which do not have storage in it. On the left side of the main entrance, double internal doors are presently leading to the
kitchen
has been furnished with
kitchen
furniture. The entrance of the living is open and the window remains the same.
However
, the internal walls are only
one
in the proposed plans, unlike in existing
floor
plan
that has 2 internal walls.
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