You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given
floor
plan
delineates the information regarding the existing plan
of the ground floor
with the proposed plan
for the building work.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that that floor
plan
has been changed over some time to provide some larger space.
The foyer door
in the existing plan
is in the form of a hall with stairs
in it. These stairs
have a warehouse under the stairs
. While
the hall leads to two interior doors. One
door
opens in the kitchen
, while
the other door
opens in the living room. The living room contains a window, which is in the shape of a half The kitchen
has two openings one
from the hall and the other one
just opposite the internal door
, kitchen
has two windows.
On the other hand
, the main entrance remains the same, however
, now this
is parallel to the stairs
, which do not have storage in it. On the left side of the main entrance, double internal doors are presently leading to the kitchen
has been furnished with kitchen
furniture. The entrance of the living is open and the window remains the same. However
, the internal walls are only one
in the proposed plans, unlike in existing floor
plan
that has 2 internal walls.Submitted by khushiaggarwal255 on
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