The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
This
line graphic provides information about the household recycling percentages in the countries of
UK
,
France
and Germany from, 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, the recycling percentages of the
UK
and Germany have experienced in a similar way a significant rise over the years,
while
the recycling percentage in
France
has experienced a downward trend. In the year
2005
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2005,
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the recycling rates of the
UK
and Germany were 35% and 20%, respectively. These two countries experienced a rise in their recycling rates between the years 2005 and 2015. Despite the fact that the percentages of both countries have improved over the selected period of time,
UK
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the UK
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finally
achieves a better
rate
in the year 2015.
At the end
of
this
decade, the recycling
rate
of
UK
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the UK
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was
of
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60%,
while
Germany’s
rate
was of 57%
approximately
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. In early 2005
France
collected positive data regarding the recycling rates of the country.
Nevertheless
,
this
situation suffered a deterioration over the years. From 2005 to 2015, the mentioned
rate
dramatically declined, only registering a percentage of 40% in 2015.
At the end
of the selected period,
France
collected the worst household recycling data.
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