The pie charts below show the online shopping slaes for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selectoing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the online shopping slaes for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. 

Summarise the information by selectoing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The proffered two pie charts provide information about the proportion of online shopping sales in four major retail sectors namely travel, films / music, books, and clothes between 2003 and 2013. Broadly, it is readily apparent that the travel
sector
contributed the biggest percentage in the first period
while
the film / music
sector
dominated the highest fraction in the second period. Looking at the chart, the dominant position came from travel agents, making up just over a third per cent in 2003.
Furthermore
, it became the second rank in 2013 with 29%.
In contrast
, the biggest proportion in 2013 went to the clothes
sector
which comprised 33%.
However
, nearly a quarter per cent contributed by
this
sector
in 2003. In terms of books retail
sector
, the proportion in 2013 was bigger than in 2003, both recorded at 19% and 22% respectively. The lowest fraction was shown by clothes which made up 16% in 2013 and the books
sector
with almost a fifth per cent.
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