The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the proportion of
men
and women in Australia in different
age
categories who took
exercises
on a regular basis in one particular year.
According to
the diagram it can be seen that except in the
age
group 15-24, more percentage of women did regular physical
exercises
in 2010 than
men
.
Moreover
, the largest figure of women doing sports regularly appeared in the
age
group 45 to 54,
whereas
that of
men
was in the
age
group 15 to 24. For male citizens between 15 to 24 years old, 52.8% of them took
exercises
regularly in 2010, a number significantly higher than that of male members aged 65 and older, which was 46.7%.
On the contrary
, the smallest percentage of
men
doing regular
exercises
was seen in the
age
category 35 to 44, being merely 39.5%.
In contrast
, the percentage of female members in the community from three different
age
groups all exceeded 50%, with the number in the
age
category 45 to 54 slightly higher than that in
age
categories 35 to 44 and 55 to 64, which were 52.5% and 53%, respectively. In comparison, the smallest portion was found in female citizens aged 65 and over, with the figure being 47.1%, which was fractionally lower than that of female civilians aged 15 to 24 (47.7%).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, age, exercises with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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