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You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: - Explain why you are unhappy - Request a refund - Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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, I recently purchased a TIMO blender from your online store and was disappointed to find that the glass parts of the device had been broken during shipping. There was not much
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 good seal in the box, which surprised me because I would have expected the shipment to be better
pack
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packed

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 in order to prevent my item. The blend was proposed to be a present for my parent that has now
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. So, I would like you to make
arrangment
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arrangement
arrangements

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for its return and to complete a full refund as soon as possible. The order number ID was P12345, and it was delivered on June 25 2023. You can kindly get in touch with me at
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 email address to plan a time for a courier to pick up the package.
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, it must be done before I move to Bangkok in the next three weeks. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours,
Krittipong
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my disappointment
  • I regret to inform you that
  • I am dissatisfied with the item I received
  • The item arrived damaged
  • The product is in unsatisfactory condition
  • I expected better quality
  • I would like to request a refund
  • I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
  • I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
  • I suggest arranging a pick-up service
  • I expect a prompt response and resolution
  • I hope for a satisfactory outcome
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