Some people are making new friends by using socializing network website and Internet chat rooms. Some people say that this is a good thing. Other people say that people should make new friends by face-to-face chat. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.
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true that Correct your spelling
admittedly
people
making new friends
in thire
life and Correct your spelling
their
this
friends
play a vital role for thire
entier Correct your spelling
their
livelyhood
. Correct your spelling
livelihood
Nowdays
most Correct the word
Nowadays
of
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apply
people
are making new friends
from
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on
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the internet
internet
because they Capitalize word
Internet
are spend
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spend
much
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a lot of
time
in vertualy
. Some Correct your spelling
virtually
virtual
individual
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individuals
belive
that Correct your spelling
believe
people
should make new friends
by face to face
talk and chat. In my opinion, making internet Add a hyphen
face-to-face
friends
are good
rather than Verb problem
is
real world
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real-world
friends
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essay, i
will discuss Change the capitalization
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about
making online Remove the preposition
apply
friendship
or Replace the word
friends
offline
friendship
which is better and why.
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friends
people
like to spend thire
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their
there
time
in
online. Not only Change preposition
apply
they
spend Add a missing verb
do they
time
for
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on
entatinment
but Correct your spelling
entertainment
also
they are studing
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studying
learning
new technology, Wrong verb form
learn
reading
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read
newspapere
and Correct your spelling
newspaper
newspapers
gameing
so on. Correct your spelling
gaming
Althugh
they spend Correct your spelling
Although
time
for
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at
diffrent parpese
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different parties
but
they meet Correct word choice
apply
with
new Change preposition
apply
people
in same
field which is good because they help each other. Online Change the article
the same
frendship
need more Correct your spelling
friends
time
compire
to Correct your spelling
compared
compare
offline
friend
because Fix the agreement mistake
friends
people
have to know each other first and also
sometime
they Replace the word
sometimes
are
meet Unnecessary verb
apply
offline
.
In modaren
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modern
time
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times
people
are not active with others. For example
, Studants
are not much Correct your spelling
students
time
with there
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their
classmate
which is kind of inactive Fix the agreement mistake
classmates
for
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with
eachother
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each other
that
is why if they are in Capitalize word
That
friendship
, it is not carry Add an article
a friendship
thire
relationship for Correct your spelling
their
long
term Correct article usage
a long
and
another fact is individual not Correct word choice
apply
intersted
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interested
to talk
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in talking
with
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in
thire
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their
friend
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friends
in
online Correct your spelling
is
such
as facebook or other socializing network website.
To sum up
, Offline
making friends
are good way to friendship
but it is hard for Replace the word
friends
long term
relationship. Add a hyphen
long-term
on
the other side online Capitalize word
On
friendship
is a good way to making
friend Wrong verb form
make
becouse
in recent Correct your spelling
because
time
people
active in
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on
Add an article
the internet
internet
for most of Capitalize word
Internet
work
which help each others.Correct pronoun usage
their work
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