The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
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The provided chart illustrates the percentage of elements allying to work operation.
Overall
, it is clear that
there is the highest figure
of 18-30 ages
in the figure
for chance for personal development, while
the lowest figure
is seen in the percentages of work environment at the same ages
. In addition
, a similar proportion is witnessed by the proportion of team spirit in both kinds of ages
.
In more detail, a similar figure
of 60% can be seen in the categories of both kinds of ages
in team spirit, which is opposite to the trends at the chance for private evolution, with more than 40% and roughly 90% at 45-60 and 18-30, respectively. Additionally
, some sections, such
as the competent boss, respect from colleagues, job satisfaction and money all have a relatively slight change of percentage between types of years.
Looking at the graph, similar to the trend of team spirit, the percentage of work environment is equal at 18-30 and 45-60 ages
, of merely 30%. Besides
, the proportion of job security at 18-30 ages
is more than twofold the figure
for 45-60 ages
.Submitted by anhnguhongmai on
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