You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar graphs
shows
the proportion of both gender's involvement in home chores and the Change the verb form
show
time
spent on carrying each task in a day.The unit is measured in minutes
. Overall
,it is evident from the chart that both males
and females
mostly engaged in cooking and the longest time
spent on
doing Change preposition
apply
a
housework is nearly 90 Remove the article
apply
minutes
.
To begin
with,Cooking was the Major chore carried out by men and women at nearly 60% and 90% respectively.Also
,it is apparent that females
carried out more cleaning than the males
with about 20
% difference, but they were less interested in house repairs when compared to the guys with a figure that doubled that of the Correct article usage
a 20
females
at 21%. Although
, The percentage of Pet care were
nearly the same at 20% in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
females
and 21% in males
.
Furthermore
,the ladies spent a longer time
in
cooking and cleaning at 85 Change preposition
apply
minutes
and 67 minutes
each.However
,the guys spent twice the figure of the females
which was 5% on home repairs, hitting the bottom of the diagram while
the time
spent on pet care was equivalent in both females
and males
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