You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graphs
shows
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the proportion of both gender's involvement in home chores and the
time
spent on carrying each task in a day.The unit is measured in
minutes
.
Overall
,it is evident from the chart that both
males
and
females
mostly engaged in cooking and the longest
time
spent
on
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doing
a
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housework is nearly 90
minutes
.
To begin
with,Cooking was the Major chore carried out by men and women at nearly 60% and 90% respectively.
Also
,it is apparent that
females
carried out more cleaning than the
males
with about
20
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a 20
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% difference, but they were less interested in house repairs when compared to the guys with a figure that doubled that of the
females
at 21%.
Although
, The percentage of Pet care
were
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nearly the same at 20% in
females
and 21% in
males
.
Furthermore
,the ladies spent a longer
time
in
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cooking and cleaning at 85
minutes
and 67
minutes
each.
However
,the guys spent twice the figure of the
females
which was 5% on home repairs, hitting the bottom of the diagram
while
the
time
spent on pet care was equivalent in both
females
and
males
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, minutes, males, females with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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