Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of their time watching television and playing video games.

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others

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think

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can lead to

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mental health. I extremely support that

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should not waste time just by sitting

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serious health issues.

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watching television can develop a lack of focus which can result in bad study performance and

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will impact

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their future careers life. In colleges and

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, they have

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and projects which require proper attention and knowledge, so if

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not

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of mind, they will

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to graduate or complete their studies.

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, In our society, we need people with knowledge and skills, which can only be possible if you focus on your studies rather than wasting your time

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leisure activities.

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problem

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arousing among

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generation, as they are not getting out of their houses and indulging in extra-curricular activities. Being

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in

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early age creates self-doubt, lack of confidence and depression, in

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kids

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up in hospitals.

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, every hospital

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of patients

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age that

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dealing with obesity and

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heart problems and they dying because of that.

To sum up

, Parents should motivate their

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to go out and connect with the world so that we can have

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and

skillful

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children in our society.