You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The diagrams provided illustrate the processes of preparing
cement
and how concrete is made from it,
along with
the various steps and equipments that are involved in their production.
Overall
, it is obvious from the pictorial representations that limestone and clay are used to make
cement
while
,
cement
produced act as one of the initial material in the concrete prepration
along with
other materials.
Firstly
, limestone and clay are crushed together to form a powder by a crusher which
then
goes
in to
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the mixer.
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the mixture
from
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it enters directly into a rotating heater which rotates the two compounds
while
a hot flame is directly subjected
on
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them.
Then
this
mixture falls on a conveyor belt which moves the powder towards a grinder where it is grounded finely producing
cement
which is later packed into bags.
Then
to make the concrete, 15% of
cement
is added into a big concrete mixer, to which 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel is added.
This
composition is mixed by rotating the
euipment
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and the concrete formed is utilized in construction works later.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
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