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Your colleague is traveling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pickup, hotel accommodation and planned his/her meetings. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should: •say when and where you will meet him/her •explain where he/she will stay •tell him/her about the other arrangements you made.

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Dear Ayesha, I am writing a letter to inform you the arrangements
of
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for
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 accommodation
has
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 been completed successfully. When I received your email about coming
in
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to
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 England for
business
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a business
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 meeting
so
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apply
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the
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I
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 excitement is going up to meet again after a long time.
Besides
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this
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, the room reservation is done by the Palace Hotel in Pakistan. Unfortunately, I will not
available
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be available
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 to pick you up
because
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because of
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 my interview for
job
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a job
the job
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. But my driver will pick you
from
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up from
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 the airport
then
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 he drop
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you to
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to
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at
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 the Motel.
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, I booked a game zone area
because
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because of
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 the games you played in your hometown.
Moreover
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, there is
cinema
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a cinema
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 in the entertainment section and I buy a ticket for you so will enjoy a movie. After one day I will plan to catch you a meet in my favourite restaurant and I
am assure
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 that you
also
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 like the dishes. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,

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coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter could be improved. It is important to clearly state when and where you will meet your colleague at the beginning of the letter.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea for better organization.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete response to the task and addresses all the required points.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable for a professional letter.
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