Your colleague is traveling from another country by plane for a meeting. You have arranged the airport pickup, hotel accommodation and planned his/her meetings. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should: •say when and where you will meet him/her •explain where he/she will stay •tell him/her about the other arrangements you made.
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Dear Ayesha,
I am writing a letter to inform you the arrangements
of
accommodation Change preposition
for
has
been completed successfully.
When I received your email about coming Correct subject-verb agreement
have
in
England for Change preposition
to
business
meeting Add an article
a business
so
Correct word choice
apply
the
excitement is going up to meet again after a long time. Correct pronoun usage
I
Besides
this
, the room reservation is done by the Palace Hotel in Pakistan. Unfortunately, I will not available
to pick you up Add a missing verb
be available
because
my interview for Add the preposition
because of
job
. But my driver will pick you Add an article
a job
the job
from
the airport Change preposition
up from
then
he drop Correct pronoun usage
you to
to
the Motel. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, I booked a game zone area because
the games you played in your hometown. Add the preposition
because of
Moreover
, there is cinema
in the entertainment section and I buy a ticket for you so will enjoy a movie. After one day I will plan to catch you a meet in my favourite restaurant and I Correct article usage
a cinema
am assure
that you Change the verb form
am assured
also
like the dishes.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter could be improved. It is important to clearly state when and where you will meet your colleague at the beginning of the letter.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea for better organization.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete response to the task and addresses all the required points.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable for a professional letter.