There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about public
transport
to express my concern about your plane. And also
this
problem occurs with buses and also
trains. It is very
common problematic story Add an article
the very
a very
as
for me. I am a student Change preposition
apply
whom
always Correct pronoun usage
who
have
to go to Correct subject-verb agreement
has
the
classes with Correct article usage
apply
transport
every per
day.
We ought to discuss the matter with Change preposition
apply
smell
of every public Add an article
the smell
transport
as in the heat as in the cold too. The worse
is that there are not always Correct word choice
worst
have had
free places to enjoy Verb problem
apply
by
Change preposition
on
trip
. Correct article usage
a trip
Further more
the loud noise of people Correct your spelling
Furthermore
are
bothering me a lot not only me. I would Change the verb form
is
therefore
be grateful if you could give me a full explanation and sort this
matter out amicably
If you do not fix above
problem l will forced to your Correct article usage
the above
transport
. l look forward to hearing from you in
your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
FiruzaChange preposition
at
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task response
Ensure that the letter addresses all the points mentioned in the task.
coherence cohesion
Organize the letter in paragraphs to improve coherence and cohesion.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repetitive phrases.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite