There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about public
transport
to express my concern about your plane. And
also
this
problem occurs with buses and
also
trains. It is
very
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the very
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common problematic story
as
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for me. I am a student
whom
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who
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always
have
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has
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to go to
the
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apply
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classes with
transport
every
per
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day. We ought to discuss the matter with
smell
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the smell
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of every public
transport
as in the heat as in the cold too. The
worse
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worst
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is that there are not always
have had
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free places to enjoy
by
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on
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trip
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a trip
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.
Further more
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Furthermore
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the loud noise of people
are
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is
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bothering me a lot not only me. I would
therefore
be grateful if you could give me a full explanation and sort
this
matter out amicably If you do not fix
above
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the above
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problem l will forced to your
transport
. l look forward to hearing from you
in
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at
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your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Firuza
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task response
Ensure that the letter addresses all the points mentioned in the task.
coherence cohesion
Organize the letter in paragraphs to improve coherence and cohesion.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repetitive phrases.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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