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You need to take some time off from work to go on holiday Write a letter to your direct manager in your letter Ask for time off and explain why provide the date And times of which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or makeup for your absence?

#time #work #holiday #manager #date #times #makeup #absence
Dear Mr. David, I am writing the letter regarding
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my off. I want to take 15 days off because of my
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your cooperation. I am not available from
15.10 2023
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15.10.2023
 to 25.10.23. I would like to tell you
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 the office. I am a student of 3rd year computer science student it's my
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. I want to take time for
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 would check my email every day. Perhaps, reply to some emails
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 remaining work .
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responsibility in my absence. I am looking forward to hearing from you and expecting your kind cooperation. Your's sincerely, Ahmed
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Task Response
Ensure that all the required information is provided, such as the specific dates and times you will be unavailable.
Coherence and Cohesion
Group related ideas together in paragraphs for better organization.
Lexical Resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to express yourself more effectively.
Grammatical Range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to avoid errors.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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