You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart delineates different
type
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types
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of digital
games
such
as mobile phone
games
, online
games
, console
games
and handheld
games
that were sold globally
in
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for
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billions
of
dollars
during the period
of
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between
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2000 and 2006. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that
most
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the most
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favored
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favoured
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type of
games
were handheld
games
. During 2000, console
games
accounts
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account
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for nearly 6
billions
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billion
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dollars
.
However
, the amount of console
games
abated each year and in 2006, it was sold for 3
billion
dollars
. In 2001, online
games
were started, only sold for 0.5
billion
dollars
. In 2002, mobile
games
and online
games
were in parallel accounts,
that is
1
billions
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billion
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. Somehow,
this
value
get
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gets
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increased to 7
billions
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billion
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dollars
and 9
billions
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billion
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dollars
for mobile phone
games
and online
games
respectively. The graph of handheld
games
was inclining, starting from 11
billion
in 2000, and going
upto
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up to
17
billion
dollars
in 2006.
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