The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting & reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the population of Australia who do exercise regularly in 2010, broken down by age.
Overall
, it can be seen that more females did regular exercise than males, excluding those under 25. Linking Words
Additionally
, as groups got older until 60 years old, more women had the habit of frequent exercise,
Regarding the 4 groups from 25 to 64 years old, women outnumbered men in attendance of physical activities, about 49% to 53 % of females did exercises regularlyLinking Words
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