Writing Task 1: The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012 The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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these two charts present the percentage of the employment in UK in 1988 and 2012.In

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I will compare the two charts.

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the highest ratio in both years unlike women,

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have a

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lower

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growth rate

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with men.

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what is shown in

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chart, men who are working in

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full time

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jobs

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percent

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and we can see how that changed in 2012, they had a huge slight down drop to 47

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, In 1988 women

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part time

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jobs and that percentage dropped to 20 in 2012 with a significant rise in the

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jobs it went from 19

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to 26

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

123 words

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Writing Task 1: The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012 The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them.Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them.discuss both views and give your opinion.

The best way to measure someone's success is to look at how much money that person has. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produce locally. Why? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

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