The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first diagram illustrates the materials and equipment necessary to produce
cement
and the second diagram shows how to produce concrete for building purposes from cement
.
In the first image, there are five stages to produce cement
. The main inputs are limestone and clay, which both are crushed to powder in the first stage. The second step is mixing this
powder and the third stage is a kind of cooking into a rotating heater. Afterward
, in the fourth step, the output passes through a grinder, resulting in Change the spelling
Afterwards
cement
. In the final process, the cement
is packed into bags.
In the second image, it is possible to observe the process of transformation of cement
into concrete. Overall
, concrete is a mix of 15% of cement
, 10% of water, 25% of sand, and finally
half of gravel, which is a sort of small stones. All these materials are put together into a cylindrical mixer, called a concrete mixer. The final product known as concrete is used for building purposes, among other applications in the construction industry.Submitted by fmulato on
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