The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002.

The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002.
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of good chemical
water
in 4 parts of the UK (
Wales
,
Scotland
, Northern
Ireland
and
England
) from 1990 to 2002.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that
rivers
in
Wales
and
Scotland
demonstrated a higher percentage of good
quality
water
than
rivers
in two other parts. The
figures
for good
water
in
Wales
and
Scotland
remained stable for most of the period,
while
in Northern
Ireland
and
England
fluctuated. Looking at the details, in 1990,
rivers
in
Wales
had the best chemical
quality
water
at nearly 97% followed by
rivers
in
Scotland
starting at 95%,
however
, the latter took the lead. In 1998, the
figures
had an opposite trend with the former declining to nearly 94% in 2002,
while
the latter rose to 97% in 2000 and remained stable until 2002.
In contrast
, the starting
figures
for the
quality
of
water
in
rivers
in Northern
Ireland
and
England
were 92% and 83% respectively. From 1992 to 1994, the percentage of
rivers
in Northern
Ireland
significantly increased outnumbering the
quality
of
rivers
in
Scotland
at around 96%,
however
, it declined to the lowest point at 83%. The
figures
for the
quality
of
rivers
in
England
and Northern
Ireland
rose to 90% and 97% respectively,
whereas
the latter took the lead in 2002, becoming the best
quality
of
water
in
rivers
.
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