The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two pie charts illustrate the data of
time
working youngers spent on dissimilar activities in the same country in 1958 and 2008. Overall
, the percentage of working shows the highest rate both in 1958 and 2008.
In 1958, people spent most of their time
working, it shows just over 30%. Travel to work was illustrated a tiny proportion by 1958 and it was the lowest percentage in that year. The sleeping rate was very close to the working percentage. The difference between them was 1 percent
in 1958.
Compared to data in 1958, adults consumed less Change the spelling
per cent
time
with their friends or family in 2008. It decreased from 19% to 6%. Also
, the population allocated less time
for sleeping. It declined from nearly one-third to exactly a quarter. Relaxing at home also
rose from 8% to 13%. During the period other interests or playing sports percent
did not change. It remained the same between 1958 and 2008.Change the spelling
per cent
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