The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The illustration below compares the Australian males and females of various age zones performing regular exercise in 2010. The values are expressed in percentages.
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under 35-44 years were doing daily physical activity in the respective time period.
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of the women and 45.1 per cent
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