The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The illustration below compares the Australian males and females of various age zones performing regular exercise in 2010. The values are expressed in percentages.

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, the proportion of

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physcial

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physical

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were

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sexes in most of the age groups.

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, around 52.8 per

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of men aged 15-24 did exercise

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, in comparison only 47.7 per

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of women fell in the same category .

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proportion of males clocking only 39.5 per

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and 52.5 per

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of the females

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under 35-44 years were doing daily physical activity in the respective time period. In 2010, approximately 53.3 per

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of the women and 45.1 per

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of the men of age zone 55-64 did exercise on a regular basis.

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, people who came under the 65 and over category shared nearly the same values

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46.7 and 47.1 for

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and

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, respectively.