In many developing countries, there are major problems with the quality of air and water caused by both industry and construction. What are some of these problems? And what solutions could be provided to prevent this?
It
is an assortment of evidence that the progression of air pollution and other global disasters Correct pronoun usage
There
rise
every day, Correct subject-verb agreement
rises
due to
the production of chemical resources and Linking Words
building
of establishments. There are Correct article usage
the building
plethora
of issues that have to be considered, Add an article
a plethora
such
as Linking Words
inner city
fabrications, construction and so on.
One of the solutions is Add a hyphen
inner-city
the
expanding the distance between cities and fuel Correct article usage
apply
productions
.
It is Fix the agreement mistake
production
a
common knowledge that because of the extreme amount of Correct article usage
apply
wastes
from manufacturing oil and gas, our world struggles with contamination of Fix the agreement mistake
waste
an
atmosphere, as far as many fuel fabrications Correct article usage
the
located
in Add a missing verb
are located
inner
Add an article
the inner
city
. To soften, authorities have to take risks to partly rebuild or remove production facilities Fix the agreement mistake
cities
minimum
Correct article usage
a minimum
150
Change preposition
of 150
kilometers
apart from urban areas and small towns. Yes, it may take several decades but the state of health of locals is essential. Change the spelling
kilometres
For instance
, Linking Words
according to
the AQI (Air Quality Index) Linking Words
reports
, in Kazakhstan, city Aksay, the level of AQI is higher than Change the verb form
report
Karaganda
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in Karaganda
,
because all manufacturers are located far away from Aksay, Remove the comma
apply
while
in Karaganda five mining factories are built Linking Words
in
inside of the province.
Another decision that should be Change preposition
apply
maintained
is to switch petroleum Verb problem
made
cars
to electric Use synonyms
cars
. Since electric Use synonyms
cars
waste less carbon dioxide and other harmful emissions Use synonyms
while
driving. Linking Words
Moreover
to build Linking Words
such
advanced engines, synthetic materials and other chemical resources are not necessary. Linking Words
For example
, to produce Zeekr electric Linking Words
cars
, ultra-modern machines with less Use synonyms
wastes
are used.
Fix the agreement mistake
waste
To conclude
, there are various solutions Linking Words
Linking Words
according
to Change preposition
apply
the
air pollution, like building industries outside of the cities, Correct article usage
apply
Correct word choice
and convert
convert
diesel Wrong verb form
converting
cars
to electric Use synonyms
cars
. I Use synonyms
strigently
believe that if with patience, authorities will invest Correct your spelling
strongly
on
building industries in rural areas, Change preposition
in
country
at the same time will enhance economically and naturally.Add an article
a country
the country
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