The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are three maps that illustrate a flooding incident in a UK
town
and compare
two
potential measures.
According to
the
first
map, there were
two
rivers joined in the middle of the
town
, one named
River
Awl through the
town
from west to east, another called
River
Bole from north of the
town
to the junction. About half of the land in
this
town
was affected by flooding including the Industrial Park and Residential Area respectively on the west and east of
River
Bole.
Additionally
, The Commercial district on the south of the
River
Awl was
also
destroyed. The
first
solution to refurbish
this
town
is to relocate these three buildings. To be specific, the Industrial Park and Residential Area will be moved to the north of their original location. Simultaneously, a new Commercial district will be constructed in the south of its original location. The benefit of
this
project
is that the
river
environment can be maintained, but it may cost enormous funding. Compared with the
first
project
, the second solution can save a lot of money. In
this
project
, a dam will be erected on the source of
two
rivers, transforming rivers into reservoirs.
Besides
, the original riverbeds will be reconstructed into channels.
Although
this
project
needn't remove three buildings, a large number of lands will be transformed into reservoirs.
Overall
, these
two
solutions respectively have their own merits. The
first
measure can minimize the damage to the environment and another solution can save enormous money.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, two, first, river, project with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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