The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.
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The two
given
pie charts provide Verb problem
apply
the
information Correct article usage
apply
of
the survey result proportion of six different children’s activities. The first chart illustrates the boy’s cultural and leisure doings in (basketball, soccer, reading, Change preposition
on
computer
games
, skateboarding and listening to music
) while
the second one depicts the events in that
the Correct word choice
which
girls
participate (Dancing, gymnastics, reading, computer
games
, netball, and listening to music
). Overall
, computer
games
are the most popular among boys while
girls
are most favorite
in dancing. Change the spelling
favourite
In contrast
, reading is the lowest activities
in boys’ perspective. Fix the agreement mistake
activity
Although
listening to music
has the exact point among girls
and boys, it is also
the smallest events
of the Fix the agreement mistake
event
girls
.
To begin
with, computer
games
is
the highest percentage of activities among boys above a Correct subject-verb agreement
are
third,
at exactly 34%. Followed by, basketball in the second list, at 26%. Next,
soccer (17%), skateboarding (11%), and hearing to song (10%). Additionally
, reading is the smallest point, at only 2%.
Moreover
, girls
are more likely to have dancing at
the first chosen, at precisely 27%, followed by reading in the second place at nearly a five (21%), Change preposition
as
computer
games
(16%), and netball (15%). In addition
, gymnastic
and listening to Fix the agreement mistake
gymnastics
music
are the least favourites among females, they has
almost the same point at 11% and 10%, respectively.Change the verb form
have
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, games, music, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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