the pie graphs below show the result of a survey of the children's activities. the first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities that girls participate.

the pie graphs below show the result of a survey of the children's activities. the first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities that girls participate.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of surveys about females and males’ activities in their free
time
that are divided into six categories.
Overall
, the majority of males allocate their
time
to sports and computer games
while
reading and listening to music take the lowest. Compared to females, they
also
mostly spend their leisure
time
on sports.
Initially
, most males choose to play computer games in their free
time
34%, followed by Basketball. Listening to music and skateboarding almost have the same level at 10% and 11%, respectively.
However
, the men allocate their
time
to reading just at a small rate at 2%, but females have slightly over ten times more than men at 21%.
Next,
dancing takes the highest ratio of women choosing to do it in their free
time
at 27%. Listening to music and gymnastics occupy the lowest percentage at 10% and 11%, in a row, and netball has a ratio higher than the former by 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • cultural activities
  • leisure activities
  • participate
  • percentage
  • gender difference
  • similar participation rates
  • traditional gender roles
  • trends
  • impact
  • parental influence
  • extracurricular activities
  • accessible
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