The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the counsumption
counsumption
of street food Correct your spelling
consumption
such
as Hamburger
,Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
fish
and chips
also
pizza in a week ,between 1970 and 1990 in England .
overall
,it can be seen that the amount
of consumer
that ateFix the agreement mistake
consumers
hamburger
and Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
fish
with chips
was increase
dramatically ,Change the verb form
was increased
was increasing
however
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,
at the end
of the
1990 year.
regardingCorrect article usage
apply
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the
that
two junk Correct determiner usage
the
foor
that had a Correct your spelling
food
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lot
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lot
lots
of Fix the agreement mistake
lot
costumer
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customer
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apply
that
they are hamburgers and Correct pronoun usage
apply
fish
with chips
, in 1970 there wasCorrect article usage
a
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a
rose
in the Correct your spelling
rise
amount
of consumption which Unnecessary verb
apply
was
stood at around 50 Verb problem
apply
costumer
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customers
then
reached Change preposition
apply
to
500 ,that was the highest Change preposition
apply
amount
of citizens that ate fish
and chips
, however
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,
dentency
for hamburgers wereCorrect your spelling
sentence
tendency
dramatic
jumped in 1990 from about 30 to 300 costumers.
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dramatically
Despit
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Despite
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apply
this
, at the
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the,
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beginning
in
1970 people ate pizza more than others , Change preposition
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amount
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quickly in 1990Change the verb form
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300 to 200 consumers.Correct your spelling
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips, amount with synonyms.
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