These pie charts show how the rates of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) change in 2015 and 2040. It clear from the graph that the energy capacity increased about 5 GW from 6.688GW to 11.678GW in 2015 and 2040. According to what is shown, fossil fuels was highest ratio in both this two years with a 64 percentage in 2015 and it decreased to 44% in 2040. Also, the other renewable energy was fall almost 2% from 2015 until 2024. While the solar energy was lowest energy in 2015 it jump from 2 percentage to 18 percentage in 2040. Moreover, the wind energy go up sharply from 5% in 2015 to 12% in 2024. However, almost 1% was drop from this two year in nuclear energy, with a 6 percentage in 2015 to 5 percentage in 2040. To sum up, we could say that the fossil fuels followed by other renewable were the highest in this period.
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These pie charts show how the rates of
energy
capacity in gigawatts (GW
) change in 2015 and 2040. It clear
from the graph that the Add a missing verb
is clear
energy
capacity increased about
5 Change preposition
by about
GW
from 6.688GW to 11.678GW in 2015 and 2040.
According to
what is shown, fossil fuels was highest
ratio in both Change the article
the highest
this
two years with Change the determiner
these
a
64 Correct article usage
apply
percentage
in 2015 and it decreased to 44% in 2040. Also
, the other renewable energy
was fall
Wrong verb form
fell
almost
2% from 2015 until 2024.
Change preposition
by almost
While
the
solar Correct article usage
apply
energy
was lowest
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the lowest
energy
in 2015 it jump
from 2 Wrong verb form
jumped
percentage
to 18 Replace the word
per cent
percentage
in 2040. Replace the word
per cent
Moreover
, the
wind Correct article usage
apply
energy
go up sharply from 5% in 2015 to 12% in 2024. However
, almost 1% was drop
from Wrong verb form
dropped
this
two Correct determiner usage
these
year
in nuclear Fix the agreement mistake
years
energy
, with a 6 percentage
in 2015 to 5 percentage
in 2040.
To sum up
, we could say that the
fossil fuels followed by other Correct article usage
apply
renewable
were the highest in Correct your spelling
renewables
this
period.Submitted by taqwaalsakiti on
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