You have a problem with a recently hired employee in your workplace. Write a letter to the HR manager. In your letter describe the problem the new employee has caused explain how other colleagues feel about the new employee's conduct say how you expect the manager to address the situation.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
regarding the misconduct and unethical behaviour
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the new hire Jatin Behal in my team. Let me explain
you
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to you
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in detail. The problem started one month ago when he got hired. I noticed that he
is
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using
office
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an office
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laptop for
the
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personal purpose, and
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, when I pointed out him he said “
stay
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away from me” in a rude tone, which I believe is unethical.
Further
, one of my
team-mate
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told me that he has disrespected her over teams.
Where he
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asked her for a personal favour, for which she had sent an email to me with a screenshot from the
teams
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chat. For your
referance
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, I have attached her email. I request you to please take appropriate action on him, and please change his team because my team members have said that they would not be able to continue to work with him. Awaiting your prompt reply. Yours Faithfully, Jaskaran Singh Awal
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task response
Ensure that all the required information is included in the letter. Specifically, mention the problem the new employee has caused and explain how other colleagues feel about the new employee's conduct.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear and logical structure in the letter. Use paragraphs to separate different ideas.
lexical resource
Improve the range of vocabulary used in the letter. Explore synonyms and varied expressions to enhance the language.
grammatical range
Check the grammar and sentence structure of the letter. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence clarity.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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