49.The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table displays information about the income in different sectors, separated by
salary
levels, in the year 2009.
Overall
, people working in the finance sector have the highest remuneration among the others, while
transportation has the biggest difference between the maximum and minimum salary
.
Individuals working in the finance area, have an average earning of 5225 pounds
, which is the highest amount compared with the other sectors, with a minimum salary
of 1600 pounds
and a maximum of 8850 pounds
. Transportation has the next highest maximum salary
, with 4580 pounds
, it had a difference of around 3500 pounds
with the lowest wage
, which is 843 pounds
, and an average of 2712 pounds
.
Construction and hospitality’s highest earnings only have a difference of 200 pounds
, with 3100 pounds
in construction and 2900 pounds
in hospitality, while
the minimum wage
, for people who work in hospitality is 890 pounds
, which is 100 pounds
higher than the minimum wage
of construction workers. Finally
, manufacturing has an average wage
of 2215 pounds
, and a minimum wage
of 930 pounds
, ranking third for the maximum wage
, with 3500 pounds
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