49.The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

49.The table presents how much people from five employment sectors earned, in three different salary levels in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table displays information about the income in different sectors, separated by
salary
levels, in the year 2009.
Overall
, people working in the finance sector have the highest remuneration among the others,
while
transportation has the biggest difference between the maximum and minimum
salary
. Individuals working in the finance area, have an average earning of 5225
pounds
, which is the highest amount compared with the other sectors, with a minimum
salary
of 1600
pounds
and a maximum of 8850
pounds
. Transportation has the next highest maximum
salary
, with 4580
pounds
, it had a difference of around 3500
pounds
with the lowest
wage
, which is 843
pounds
, and an average of 2712
pounds
. Construction and hospitality’s highest earnings only have a difference of 200
pounds
, with 3100
pounds
in construction and 2900
pounds
in hospitality,
while
the minimum
wage
, for people who work in hospitality is 890
pounds
, which is 100
pounds
higher than the minimum
wage
of construction workers.
Finally
, manufacturing has an average
wage
of 2215
pounds
, and a minimum
wage
of 930
pounds
, ranking third for the maximum
wage
, with 3500
pounds
.
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