The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the bar chart illustrates the figure of people divided by gender in the UK who attended
further
education, whether they were studying full-time or part-time between the years 1970 to 1991.
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overall
, it is clear to Linking Words
both
genders that more Use synonyms
students
are enrolled in part-time than in full-time studies over the time periods. female academic attendees have steadily increased over the years, Use synonyms
while
male Linking Words
students
tend to slightly Use synonyms
fluctuated
.
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fluctuate
according to
the graph, in part-time education, from 1970 to 1971 men started off higher with 1,000,000 Linking Words
students
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whereas
women were nearly 800,000 people. in the second period, the number of men dropped by almost 200,000 and women rose to around 100,000. by the end of the year from 1990-1991, Linking Words
both
sexes are increasing. Use synonyms
however
, women are striking the highest peak for nearly 1,200,000 academic attendees.
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furthermore
, full-time education Linking Words
students
are generally low in three periods of time. but there is a trend that over the years there has been a steady increase in Use synonyms
both
sexes. it is noted that in the beginning, the male student was higher (100,000) than the female (50,000). and Use synonyms
then
in 1990-1991, Linking Words
both
genders shared Use synonyms
equal
amount of enrolled Add an article
an equal
students
around 210,000.Use synonyms
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