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The line graph illustrates the expenditure of British citizens on four different purposes of visiting abroad (holiday, business, visiting friends or relatives and miscellaneous) from 1993 to 2013.

The line graph illustrates the expenditure of British citizens on four different purposes of visiting abroad (holiday, business, visiting friends or relatives and miscellaneous) from 1993 to 2013.
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The line chart illustrates the amount of money spent by the citizens of
UK
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 on visits abroad from 1993 to 2013.
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,
expect
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except
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 for miscellaneous, all expenses increased significantly over the period given.Comparing
holiday
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holidays
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 and other
spendings
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spending
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 of
British
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the British
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 ,it is obvious that the holiday was
priority
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a priority
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 and they spent the most money between 1993 and 2013. The holiday had the highest number in 1993 with just over 9
billions
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billion
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of
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pounds,
then
 it began to grow dramatically and reached the highest point at more than 24
billions
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billion
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 in 2008,
however
,
this
 started to fluctuate between approximately 21 and 24
billions
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billion
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.The spending on visits
friends
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to friends
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 and relatives
oversea
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overseas
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 was at around 2
billions
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billion
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 and demonstrated a considerable climb to just below 6
billions
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billion
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. The amount of money that was spent on business equalled almost 3
billions
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billion
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of
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pound
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pounds
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 and showed a quick rise to just about 6
billions
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billion
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 over the period in question.The figure for expenses of miscellaneous was relatively stable at around 1 billion for 20 years.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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