The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The vertical chart makes a comparison between the expenditures for five majors in 4 different nations in 2009.
Overall
, the highest expenditure was housing, meanwhile
the opposite was true for health care and clothing.
In detail, the proportion of Americans Add a comma
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on food, transportation and health care was 12%, 17%, and 7% respectively, while
the figure for housing was 25%, which is 5 times as much as expenditure on clothing. Meanwhile, there was a similar percentage of time
allocated for housing and transportation by Canadians at 20%, followed by the time
allocated for food, clothing and healthcare at 15%, 5% and over 5% respectively.
On the other hand
, the United Kingdom and Japan experienced a minor difference in percentage
of 5 categories, with the largest gap being seen in transportation at 10%. Add an article
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Besides
that, the share of expenditure on Food and health care witnessed Japan’s citizens allocated 23% and 4% of their time
respectively, which is 2% higher than that in the United Kingdom.Submitted by phongnguyenthanh630 on
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