The graphs below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014.
The line graph illustrates the
unnual
spent for visitors to New Zealand from 5 Correct your spelling
annual
unusual
coutries
for the years 1996 to 2014.
Correct your spelling
countries
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Overall
Ovearall
,during Correct your spelling
Overall
this
eighteen-year period,Australians remained the biggest profit in 2006, with all other four countries
visitors
spending much less on them.
In 2002 visitors from The UK consumption Change noun form
countries'
deacreased
to less Correct your spelling
decreased
500$
, Change preposition
than 500$
while
The USA and Japan spent about as much as each other.
However
,by 2010, the gap in spending between these two countries had widened and considerably more money was spent from The USA than from The UK.
As can be seen from the graph, the amount money
spent in all five countries Change preposition
of money
but
rose the most dramatically in China. In 2004
was a sharp growth but profit in 2008 go down.Correct word choice
apply
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