The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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who did not work full-time after completing their Fix the agreement mistake
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study
in 2008.
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.
On the one hand, 29,665 graduate Fix the agreement mistake
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students
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study
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Besides
, 17735 Linking Words
students
started a part-time job. Use synonyms
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Furthermore
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students
engaged themselves in voluntary Use synonyms
works
. Fix the agreement mistake
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graduate
students
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