Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
to inform you about my lost
handbag
in
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your plane, flight GT544 Canada to
London
last
week. I was travelling from Canada to
London
on Uk airlines to see my parents in
London
,
Last
week on November 15
2023
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, 2023,
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flight arrival time to
London
was around 9:45 pm, When the aircraft landed at Heathrow airport it started raining cats and dogs and the
airhostess
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air hostess
on duty stopped the passengers and asked them to wait in the aircraft until the rain stop, I was panicked because I had to catch the train to reach my
parents
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parent's
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house,
However
after 15 minutes of waiting inside the plane,
finally
the plane door was opened and passengers were advised to leave, everyone rushed towards the door, In
this
haphazard situation I forgot to pick my
handbag
which was under my seat, my seat number was EK223C.
Moreover
, my
handbag
is bright red in color with
leather
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a leather
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strap holder
along with
a white fur
key-chain
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key chain
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, Inside the
handbag
there is a small diary,
few
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a few
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pens and my wallet which has all my credit cards
however
I have informed the police and the bank about the missing of my bag. Anyhow, I want you to check my bag
in
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the airline and with the related authorities, It's been a week now I still have
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hope that I will get it back, I am leaving my number and address below, kindly take quick action and find my bag, If it is found kindly call me or you can
also
post it of the given address. Waiting for your positive response Yours Sincerely, Aliyah Smith
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Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs, with each paragraph focusing on a single idea.
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Ensure that your greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.
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Use a wider range of vocabulary and expressions to enhance your writing.
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Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity and accuracy.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
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