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The figures give information about economic growth and household across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts illustrate the rise of the economy and the family expenses between 1995 to 2010.
According to
 the graph, economic growth started from one per
cent
 in 1995.
Then
 gradually it rose up to four per
cent
 in 2005. After 2005, the growth of the economy decreased to -5 per
cent
 in 2008 before it rose to one per
cent
 again in 2010. Over the same period, the expenditure of a house has been divided into five parts. Most of the people spent their money on housing and food from 1995 to 2010. Which is followed by other expenses.
Moreover
, individuals spent more on clothing, entertainment and travel in 2005 compared to other years.
Also
, society consumed 20 per
cent
 of food in 2000 from total spending.
Overall
, the economy grew from one per
cent
 to four per
cent
 between 1995 to 2005 and fell to -5 per
cent
 in 2008.
Additionally
, families spent 25 per
cent
 on
overall
 expenditure for housing in 1995, 2005 and 2010
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