The tables show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table

comapres

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compares

the final outcomes of two surveys conducted in a city regarding various sectors like

education

, healthcare, environment etc., in

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the year

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year

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years

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1980 and 2010. The values are expressed in percentages.

Overall

, at the

beginning

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beginning,

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most individuals marked

healthcare

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the healthcare

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sector to be the best of all which was replaced by

education

by the end. Neutral remarks

was

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given for shops,

whereas

the worst ratings were reserved for the transport system

throghout

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throughout

the time period. In 1980, around 82 per

cent

of the people thought healthcare to be the best aspect,

following

this

education

and environment held exactly

same

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proportions which was 72 per

cent

Highest

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The highest

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number of neutral ratings were nearly shared by

environment

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the environment

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, employment,

education

and shops

that

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apply

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is 22,22,23 and 24 per

cent

, respectively. Transport was given the worst rating by 32 per

cent

people

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of people

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. About 82 per

cent

persons agreed

upon

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that

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education

to be the best sector in the city by 2010,

following

this

, the most neutral remarks

was

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were

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given for the shops and

worst

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the worst

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rating was again marked by 38 per

cent

individuals

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of individuals

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for the transport system.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

182 words

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