The tables show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table

comapres

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compares

the final outcomes of two surveys conducted in a city regarding various sectors like

education

, healthcare, environment etc., in

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the year

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year

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years

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1980 and 2010. The values are expressed in percentages.

Overall

, at the

beginning

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most individuals marked

healthcare

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the healthcare

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sector to be the best of all which was replaced by

education

by the end. Neutral remarks

was

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given for shops,

whereas

the worst ratings were reserved for the transport system

throghout

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throughout

the time period. In 1980, around 82 per

cent

of the people thought healthcare to be the best aspect,

following

this

education

and environment held exactly

same

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the same

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proportions which was 72 per

cent

Highest

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number of neutral ratings were nearly shared by

environment

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the environment

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, employment,

education

and shops

that

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apply

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is 22,22,23 and 24 per

cent

, respectively. Transport was given the worst rating by 32 per

cent

people

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of people

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. About 82 per

cent

persons agreed

upon

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that

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education

to be the best sector in the city by 2010,

following

this

, the most neutral remarks

was

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were

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given for the shops and

worst

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the worst

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rating was again marked by 38 per

cent

individuals

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of individuals

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for the transport system.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

182 words

4.50

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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The tables show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Young people should seek the guidance of older individuals rather than younger ones. Whether you agree or disagree?

Production of vegetables in millions of tonnes (Mt), 2012.

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