A close friend is coming to visit you. S/he has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Ask for more details about your friend's plans. • Suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown. • Tell your friend about food or drink s/he should try during his/her stay.

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Dear Maria, I hope you are doing well since the

last

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time we met. Anyway, I am writing you

this

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letter in response to the

mesage

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message

you sent me

last

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night, about visiting the city.

First,

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you need to give me more details about your trip. I need to be prepared for

this

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big event. Please, let me know where you will stay, and

also

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when are you planning to come. I already have some plans, there is a new park in the city, with different

retaurants

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restaurants

and a beautiful lake, you will love it. I will

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take you to my favourite place in the world,

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apply

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downtown, where there are lots of festivals every weekend, we can dance all day long. Here in my hometown, we have a delicious seafood restaurant called Fish Dish, and you will not believe the size of their crab. Once

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finish the dinner, I will take you to the new beer store that just

oppened

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opened

in my neighbourhood, they have all kinds of beer. I hope you have a great trip. Best regards, Lucas

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coherence cohesion

Please ensure to follow the letter writing format. Greeting and closing should follow a specific format such as 'Dear Maria,' and 'Best regards, Lucas'.

task achievement

The letter lacks detailed elaboration and response to the given prompts. Please provide more specific suggestions and details about places to visit, things to do, and food and drinks to try in your hometown.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas, provide more precise and varied descriptions of places, food, and activities in your hometown.

grammatical range

Review and correct the use of articles, prepositions, verb tenses, and sentence structure for greater accuracy in grammar.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
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for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

182 words

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