The table describes the percentage of employers’ difficulty in recruiting employees in four different fields from 2003 to 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant
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The table reports the proportion
employers’
struggle in recruiting employees in 2003 and 2004 for four different areas which are manufacturing, building, commerce and services. Change preposition
of employers’
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the percentage of difficulty in finding skilled Linking Words
workers
was much higher than any other group for all sectors.
Difficulty in finding skilled Use synonyms
workers
and unskilled Use synonyms
workers
generally increased in 2004, except for commerce, which fell in that year. The Commerce group stood at 47% in 2003 and slightly decreased to 41% for skilled Use synonyms
workers
Use synonyms
as well as
unskilled Linking Words
workers
dropped about 3% in 2004. The other 3 sectors rose slightly around 3-10% for all types of difficulty. Finding skilled Use synonyms
workers
’ figures were the highest with all sectors above 40% followed by unskilled Use synonyms
workers
at more than 20%.
Finding technical and managerial Use synonyms
workers
, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, generallyLinking Words
decrease
. All Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
are
droppedUnnecessary verb
apply
2
-3%, excluding the building which decreasedChange preposition
by 2
4
%. Change preposition
by 4
This
group Linking Words
also
represents the lowest with all numbers being below 15%.Linking Words
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