The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The presented tables enumerates in percentage of
population
aged 65 and above in three different countries in 1988, 2000, and after thirty years. By looking at the Add an article
the population
detail
, it can be inferred that by 2030, Canada is predicted Fix the agreement mistake
details
have
the biggest difference Fix the infinitive
to have
percentage
of Change preposition
in percentage
population
.
As can be observed from the figure, UK
Correct article usage
the UK
has
the Wrong verb form
had
leats
Correct your spelling
least
population
in 1988 with
14.23%, in 12 years after slowly Change preposition
at
increased
by 0.66% difference, and will become 20.35% in 2030. Wrong verb form
increasing
Although
it had the biggest difference in number, but
by 2030, Remove the conjunction
apply
UK
will have the smallest Correct article usage
the UK
population
. Canada was the second rank of population
with 16.32%, in 2000 the number of population
had grown to 20.67% and in projection, 30 years later it will be more than a quarter. In addition
, Germany that
had the biggest Correct pronoun usage
which
population
of people aged 65 and over in 1988 still had the same position in 2000 but with more than 25%. after three decades Germany is predicted to have the biggest population
of all three different countries. The population
will be more than 30%.Submitted by icy icy
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