The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates information regarding various shipping goods within the range of petroleum, engineered

products

jewelry

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, agricultural and textile in a particular country between 2015-2016. The table

however

shows the fluctuation of export values of the same goods in the same period. The values are given in billion dollars.

Overall

, fuel

products

had the highest value of export in both years

while

textiles brought the lowest value to the country. Energy

products

, machinery and textile items had a growth in export values, approximately $250,000,000, $500,000,000 and $750,000,000 respectively, in 2016 compared to 2015

while

gems and

jewelry

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brought less value of $250,000,000 to the country in 2016 than

2015

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in 2015

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However

, there was not a significant difference between the incomes of food

products

(around 30 billion dollars each) in both years.

Moreover

, to be precise, petroleum, machines harvested goods and textiles had a 3%, 8.5%, 0.81% and 15.24% rise in income by selling to o

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