The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of Australian people in several
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gaps who did frequent exercises in 2010.
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, it can be seen that a large part of the individuals trained often but the proportion of men was higher than that of women, except for the youngest and the oldest
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groups. 48,9% of the males between 25 and 34 years exercised regularly and
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percentage increased to around 53% in the gap between 35 and 64. In comparison, the number of frequently training females fluctuated between 42 and 45% between their 25th and 64th year. There was a slight decline to 39% in the
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gap between 35 and 44, which was the group with the highest difference in proportions between men and women. The same amount of people (around 46%) from both sexes did regular physical activities from the
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of 65 and above. Women between the ages of 15 and 24 were more active (with 52.8%) than men in the same category, which reached 47.7%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • Percentage
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participation
  • Age group
  • Trend
  • Significant
  • Notable
  • Gender gap
  • Comparative analysis
  • Consistent
  • Decline
  • Progressive
  • Conversely
  • Motivations
  • Barriers
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