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Band 4.5

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: - explain what you are currently doing - describe your suitability for this area of work - say when you can attend an interview.

Hello, I
had
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have
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 seen
yours
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your
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 advertisement for working as
a
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apply
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waiters
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waiter
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 and
waiteresses
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waitresses
 and I would like to be a candidate for
this
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 job. Right now I am living with my parents and searching for a new
oppotunity
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opportunity
. I am
undergrated
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an undergraduate
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 in Economics and Social Science but I am not finding
a
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apply
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work in
this
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 type of subject
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that
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which
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 is why I am looking for new chances. I
had
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have
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 been working as
a waiters
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a waiter
waiters
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 since my college almost two years ago and I used to work in it
for
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to
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 pay my studies bills
,
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apply
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 when I worked there I was
resposible
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responsible
 for
cash
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the cash
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 register, I was attending
the
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to the
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 public, serving food to people, often cleaning
restaurant
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the restaurant
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 and cleaning dishes. For
this
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types
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type
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 of
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task
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tasks
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tasks,
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 I believe that I can help your restaurant with my experience as a waiter. You can choose to attend an interview with me
everyday
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every day
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 of the week, do not worry
about
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about it
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, I am available
monday
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Monday
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 to
friday
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Friday
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 from eight am to five pm. I hope we can talk
soon
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apply
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later and I am sure that I am the best option for
this
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 type of work.
Sincerly
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Sincerely
, Candidate.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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